well if these are actually your loops, and you did program them, well the great job with the synths in the beginning, but i fear you didnt program them bc of how repetive this song gets after and interesting opening- and the filters and fx's LFOs or envelopes are looped throughtout the song, i would think taht you would do a better job with stuff like that if you could program synths like this- besides the poor one that you chose for the lead
my music is pish
fairy music? who decides whether or not music is gay... you dont have to be gay to like softer or more proggressive music- i try to be original, the song gay man was not really a style of music and hardly original. it was just some jerk strumming his guitar while he tried to be funny overusing the word gay, i didnt know that fell into a genre. and most of all, classifications/genres are stupid, i write music however i want to write it, i dont try to write a certain type of music, you lose a lot of your creativity trying to be something else
this is just boring, you really need to try to make some better melodies and be able to vary it more through the song
you like to pitch drums up and down a lot, but it almost never sounds good with the melody
if you took some of your style right now, and applied it to a more structured form of writing music, i think you would be writing a lot better.
you may get points for being original sometimes, but just bc ur the first to do something doesnt mean that it is good
stick with it, and try to be more melodic, or even just structured if you like rhythm more.
Thank you for the review!
I am now working on something that has a lot better beat to it, I will hope you will like that one, the main block I am having with it is not being able to find the sound I want to add to it, and as I am sure you know, Fruity Loops is huge, so it can take a while to find and tweek just the sound oyu want, again thank you for the review.
not horrible.. but kind of bland, some cool basslines, but the sample in the beginning is so out of place... stick with it youll get better
your 14? impressive, but what are u doing drinking alcohol? didnt they teach about being a good kid... lol keep up the good work k
Lol i grew up at a pretty young age...heh.
Thanks for the positive feedback :D
sweet sounds, nice build up... gets kinda boring... :( switch it up a little towards the end but cool track nonetheless :D
fantastic... blows away all the other crap on portal
dude im sorry but there is nothing to be heard here... the sounds dont mix as a whole, the sample gets repetitive, and its just way too chaotic, the notes seem completely random, you have a cool part once or twice but thats hardly enough to save this from being awful. this is not a style of music...
When I was at the mall the other day, I saw a black person, you should go to the mall some times, you might see a black person as well!
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