fantastic

awesome fucking movie man.. all of ur stuff is awesome

hmmm?

well if these are actually your loops, and you did program them, well the great job with the synths in the beginning, but i fear you didnt program them bc of how repetive this song gets after and interesting opening- and the filters and fx's LFOs or envelopes are looped throughtout the song, i would think taht you would do a better job with stuff like that if you could program synths like this- besides the poor one that you chose for the lead

my music is pish

fairy music? who decides whether or not music is gay... you dont have to be gay to like softer or more proggressive music- i try to be original, the song gay man was not really a style of music and hardly original. it was just some jerk strumming his guitar while he tried to be funny overusing the word gay, i didnt know that fell into a genre. and most of all, classifications/genres are stupid, i write music however i want to write it, i dont try to write a certain type of music, you lose a lot of your creativity trying to be something else

boring

this is just boring, you really need to try to make some better melodies and be able to vary it more through the song

you like to pitch drums up and down a lot, but it almost never sounds good with the melody

if you took some of your style right now, and applied it to a more structured form of writing music, i think you would be writing a lot better.
you may get points for being original sometimes, but just bc ur the first to do something doesnt mean that it is good

stick with it, and try to be more melodic, or even just structured if you like rhythm more.